M Y V I S I T T O J U N G L E Sayali Saoji 10 1/2 yrs sayalirsaoji2000@yahoo.co.in When I went to visit a jungle, I saw an eagle, On a tree; And bisons spree; Our greatest wish, To watch a tiger swish,  Was also fulfilled; And of course the deer flooded, Through the whole forest; The flock of peacock,  Gave us a chance to glance At their dance; But now the time had come, To go back home, So bye bye Jungle - The Animal's Home.

Momoko Narimatsu 21-Jul-2003

As my hobby is to read poems, I have never read such a nice poem. Please try to write another poem too. So that I can tell my friends. BEST OF LUCK! And thank you.

Shreya 4-Aug-2003

Hey there! Nice to see your work here again. The visit sounds dreamy, haha, wish I could see a tiger swishing…

Santosh 8-Sep-2003

Cute, it could be better for a 10 year old kid though.