Monsoon   Moksha A. Pillai Class II Navrachana Higher Secondary School  It's very hot, it's very hot What should I do? Suddenly black clouds came The thunder struck And the lightning flashed It's raining it's raining Hip Hip Hurray! The birds are flying Cows are running And I am dancing in rain The children are playing with paper boats  Some are dancing in the rain I am happy to see the world relieved of the heat.

Gayatri Kunte 8-Jul-2003

Moksha I really enjoyed your poem very much. Keep it up..

Shreya 4-Aug-2003

Loved the way you kept up the tense. Very very good work! Keep it up, poetess!

Santosh 8-Sep-2003

Such a nice scene described :-) do birds fly when it's raining?

Vidya V. Nair 18-Nov-2003

Hi Moksha, Really it is a good creation by you. Keep it up and Best of luck.

sagar goyal 9-Aug-2004

The poem is really good and I enjoyed it thoroughly

soumya sharma 13-Jul-2005

It is a very nice poem. I actually did not expect a 2nd grader wrote that though I am in 11th grade I cannot write this poem. Very good moksha. Keep up the very good work

SUSHANT 14-Jul-2007

This is a very good poem. You can become a great poet if you write this type of poems.

Anik Siwach 24-Jun-2009

Its vry vry kiddie types

japnit 2-Jul-2011

It's really a good poem.

japnit 2-Jul-2011

It is really a good poem.

sanaya 16-Dec-2011

nice